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Mr. Mcdaniel's Cocker Spaniel
by
Celista Tremblay
Mr. McDaniel
had a cocker spaniel
had called him Blacky Midnight
Blacky was devious
and oh so mischievous
He caused Mr. McDaniel such fright
Mr. McDaniel was old
and he had no control
of this perfect puppy despite
So he packed up his bags
and his old play rags
and headed for the shelter with might
He walked through the
door and at that time he swore
This puppy will be out of my sight
And when he arrived home
he saw Blacky’s bone
and realized he had lost him for spite
Mr. McDaniel’s
perfect cocker spaniel
was now alone in the night
So he got in the car
and he raced really far
to get to the shelter with plight
Then he scooped up his dog
And when back in the fog
And headed home with Blacky Midnight
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