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Immortal Love
by
Fenix

Her hair glow golden as the sun,
She must indeed to me be one,
Who caught my Love, and now it's done,
May strength of love never be gone!
It all begone in cyberspace,
In this illogic, twisted maze,
We met, though not yet face to face,
My soul enspelled by your gaze.
They said "impossible, absurd!"
Of this love never have they heard,
They tried to chase me off her, with word,
But for the love, I rose from dirt.
Now all of troubles seem to fade,
Our love no longer dwell in shade,
We overcame with, or without aid,
For our love now will never fade.

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