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  Topic: spring break by mark kolar
dkneip

Replies: 1
Views: 3908

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 7:17 pm   Subject: spring break by mark kolar
hi mark,

if you would like my thoughts on your story, free of charge, of course, please respond with your motivations for needing/wanting to post the piece on the forum. i wonder if it was a homew ...
  Topic: Universal Principles
dkneip

Replies: 40
Views: 26971

PostForum: Global Reasoning   Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 11:44 am   Subject: exactly
and i hate to have a crazy person prove my point for me, but this is what iranian president mahmoud ahmadinejad said today about the UN imposed deadline:

"Those powers that do not abide by God ...
  Topic: Universal Principles
dkneip

Replies: 40
Views: 26971

PostForum: Global Reasoning   Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 11:02 am   Subject: hmm
there must be more to a persons existence than religion. if that is all anyone is fighting for, how can there ever be peace or security anywhere?

if the US leaves the middle east, will osama and t ...
  Topic: The Terribly Moonlit Garden by Daniel W. Kneip
dkneip

Replies: 14
Views: 9286

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 5:16 pm   Subject: yes
Dave,

That is very good software. I have something slightly different, not as inclusive, but it gets the job done using keyboard shortcuts. I've worn out many a "tab" button without it! ...
  Topic: Rocco’s Place by Harry Buschman
dkneip

Replies: 4
Views: 4003

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 2:17 pm   Subject: yes
Harry,

I'm enjoying these shorter stories of yours quite a bit. There's an old saying in screenwriting: "Get in the scene as late as possible, and get out as soon as possible."

Your w ...
  Topic: The Terribly Moonlit Garden by Daniel W. Kneip
dkneip

Replies: 14
Views: 9286

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 12:22 pm   Subject: The Terribly Moonlit Garden by Daniel W. Kneip
Thank you, Linda.

I enjoy making interpretations of the facts, because I revel in taking those liberties as a writer. But I am not trying to base my works on absolute fact and truth.

I have don ...
  Topic: The Terribly Moonlit Garden by Daniel W. Kneip
dkneip

Replies: 14
Views: 9286

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 10:58 am   Subject: yes
Linda, thank you for writing about your work and experiences and congratulations on the acclaim you've received!

In my spare time, my friends and I make short films - I write the scripts and direct ...
  Topic: The Terribly Moonlit Garden by Daniel W. Kneip
dkneip

Replies: 14
Views: 9286

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 12:49 pm   Subject: yes
my longer stories (3-4 pages) are, i think, well done and thoughful, but i get so much more enjoyment out of these short shorts that have the ability to speak volumes in so little time.

harry's w ...
  Topic: The Terribly Moonlit Garden by Daniel W. Kneip
dkneip

Replies: 14
Views: 9286

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 11:09 am   Subject: thank you
Harry, thank you for your thoughts. you got me thinking about sources of light: could candlelight be considered artificial even though the flame is natural, but wick and wax elements are manmade? i ...
  Topic: Life’s Labyrinth by Harry Buschman
dkneip

Replies: 4
Views: 3941

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 12:01 pm   Subject: Life’s Labyrinth by Harry Buschman
It will be nice if it ends that way, Harry. Very Happy

Upon the second reading, I really wondered what the old man's journey consisted of - but especially where he ended up (how well he'd done) - and wh ...
  Topic: I am sick and tired of war
dkneip

Replies: 11
Views: 8924

PostForum: Global Reasoning   Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 9:21 am   Subject: yes
You are right, you know. You can almost smell armageddon coming. I think, in many ways, we (society) have earned a horrific death.
  Topic: I am sick and tired of war
dkneip

Replies: 11
Views: 8924

PostForum: Global Reasoning   Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 9:04 am   Subject: I am sick and tired of war
Clive, you left out the war against AIDS (but how could one person keep track of every single battle?). I think this one is interesting for two reasons:

1. It is a terrible disease that needs a so ...
  Topic: 500 X 30 - Doorways
dkneip

Replies: 18
Views: 9175

PostForum: "The 500 Words Project -- Flash Fiction"   Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 1:44 pm   Subject: yes
Harry, brilliant essay!
  Topic: Baked Bread and Rolls - Daniel W. Kneip
dkneip

Replies: 8
Views: 5798

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 1:40 pm   Subject: yes
Jax, I put actually very little thought into my writing. I do A LOT of free association writing where the rules are simple: fill a piece of paper with a story and never stop the pen from moving. The ...
  Topic: Baked Bread and Rolls - Daniel W. Kneip
dkneip

Replies: 8
Views: 5798

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 12:53 pm   Subject: yes
thank you for your kind words, all. i'm happy and encouraged that you enjoyed it.
  Topic: Prom Night by Harry Buschman
dkneip

Replies: 1
Views: 2416

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 12:51 pm   Subject: Prom Night by Harry Buschman
Well it's a small world afterall, yes? Living life by the Golden Rule seems important to me and exercising this judgment comes with age and maturity. Humorous story, Harry, and thoughtfully crafted. ...
  Topic: 500 X 06 The Tunnel
dkneip

Replies: 9
Views: 6454

PostForum: "The 500 Words Project -- Flash Fiction"   Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 12:15 am   Subject: 500 X 06 The Tunnel
THE CULPRITS

Billi Jo Harmer steamed over the painting, the third in the past month.

When the first was discovered in the tunnel, appearing suddenly one morning, she demanded the entire wall be ...
  Topic: A Day in the Life - Reid Laurence
dkneip

Replies: 4
Views: 2208

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 1:58 pm   Subject: hmm..
The thing is, how COULD the reader see the cannibal twist coming? Why would our minds even go there? So the gag works in the sense that there's a terrible revelation that would be impossible to pred ...
  Topic: 500 X 03 Gallery
dkneip

Replies: 36
Views: 19825

PostForum: "The 500 Words Project -- Flash Fiction"   Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 12:37 am   Subject: Mr. Brillston's First Show
Mr. Brillston nervously tapped his finger against his teeth.

A lively, dapper lady approached. Her hair was pulled back so tight it made her features quite distinct and he felt he was looking at s ...
  Topic: 500 X 02 Rider
dkneip

Replies: 11
Views: 6663

PostForum: "The 500 Words Project -- Flash Fiction"   Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 12:21 am   Subject: The No-Show
The King would have his head for sure this time. And all on account of misdirection!

"Damn!" the jester shrieked over the howling wind, finally spotting the castle in the far and away distance. ...
  Topic: 500 X 05 Watch Out
dkneip

Replies: 20
Views: 10916

PostForum: "The 500 Words Project -- Flash Fiction"   Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2006 11:59 pm   Subject: S.O.S.
She was a rookie of the worst kind. The worst kind, I tell ya! And when I was gunned down and lay bleedin' in the street, this dame was first to answer my distress call.

I went down to the indust ...
  Topic: The Son of Mehittabel-by Harry Buschman
dkneip

Replies: 9
Views: 3213

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 1:06 am   Subject: yes
Harry,

I like how your narrator, throughout the story, finds fault in the cat's behavior, demeanor, even suggests that cats are not smart (which is not true haha) and overall, describes the cat as ...
  Topic: Matrix and Remembering Elisha - by Aaron Atkinson
dkneip

Replies: 1
Views: 1343

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 9:47 pm   Subject: Matrix and Remembering Elisha - by Aaron Atkinson
I would say between the matrix and your father's regard for life, Aaron, you have a pretty firm foundation on which to continue building your existence.

Both submissions are thoughtful and apprec ...
  Topic: The Shells of 1988 by Jax Rerun
dkneip

Replies: 4
Views: 2716

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 1:46 am   Subject: The Shells of 1988 by Jax Rerun
Had to go back in time to find this one, Jax. Sorry for the delay.

Yeah, interesting story. It certainly is visual. There are some very well written lines that stand out - "...thick black centip ...
  Topic: Meet the God - by C. Krishnan
dkneip

Replies: 1
Views: 1257

PostForum: Feedback Forum   Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 12:03 pm   Subject: Meet the God - by C. Krishnan
An instruction manual for meeting god?

This is a stark contrast from Harry's gods, who, as Dave remarked, seemed soulless. The comparison I find intriguing.

There is goodness to be found in all ...
 
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