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Linda
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 7:43 am    Post subject: On Ocean Street, Carlsbad, California by Kirby Wright Reply with quote


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Replaced by charming
Blooms? The blue woman
Remains at her window.

She is watching
The clouds build mountains
Over the sea.


Haunting picture, Kirby. Thanks for sharing. And welcome to the Writer's Voice.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 10:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It is a very picturesque poem. Original subject very informing. Nice write.

J.
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