Joined: 15 Jan 2004
Location: New York
|Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2006 6:54 am Post subject: Reflections in the pool of my childhood summers by Crystal J
|Reflections in the pool of my childhood summers by Crystal J. Stranaghan
You paint a beautiful picture of youth. There is a magic in trees, rivers and certainly the sea. You go from one to the other without giving us time to take a breath.
There is an abruptness in the story that made me stop and re-read a bit. The change from the river to the ocean and then a dash into the office for an ice cream – a little dizzying.
But thanks for letting me into your childhood.
We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master.