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Reflections in the pool of my childhood summers by Crystal J

 
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 08, 2006 6:54 am    Post subject: Reflections in the pool of my childhood summers by Crystal J Reply with quote

Reflections in the pool of my childhood summers by Crystal J. Stranaghan

You paint a beautiful picture of youth. There is a magic in trees, rivers and certainly the sea. You go from one to the other without giving us time to take a breath.

There is an abruptness in the story that made me stop and re-read a bit. The change from the river to the ocean and then a dash into the office for an ice cream a little dizzying.

But thanks for letting me into your childhood.
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