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Reflections in the pool of Christmases Past by Crystal J. St

 
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 08, 2006 7:07 am    Post subject: Reflections in the pool of Christmases Past by Crystal J. St Reply with quote

Reflections in the pool of Christmases Past by Crystal J. Stranaghan

A very nice follow-up to the summer piece, a lot less active and a picture of a more introspective girl than the physical dynamo she was in the summer. I found both pieces very well written and reminiscent of the early work of some of those young lionesses of the twenties.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 11:44 pm    Post subject: Thanks Harry Reply with quote

Thanks for the feedback Harry, and I'm happy you enjoyed the "snapshots". I am also glad there was a visible difference between the two. Reflections of Summer was written over four years ago, while the winter piece was written four weeks ago ; ) Pretty big age gap on the time I was reflecting on too - the first resting securely in the arms of childood, while the second struggling to leave it behind but with nothing definite to embrace in its place yet.

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