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Adam Gilson
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PostPosted: Sat May 26, 2007 9:00 pm    Post subject: Love by Angela Lee Annette Reply with quote

Very nice poem, Angela!

You eloquently, yet simply, defined a relationship in such a clever way.

Kudos to you!

adam
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Jolanta
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PostPosted: Sat May 26, 2007 11:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Itís very original poem, Angela. And itís interesting for people learning English. I rewrote your poem in such a way to pronounce it in the same way. I received:

2 people
2gether 2day
2morrow 2
live 2
die 2
hearts 2
minds 2
souls 2
love 2
hate 2


Now Iím wondering which version is more telling... Cool
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