Joined: 14 Jan 2004
|Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 12:30 pm Post subject: Mrs. Fannie Lou Hamer, The Majorette by E.P. McKnight
|Another noble subject...I commend you for your effort.
McKnight, these are serious poems about honorable historic events, however, the forced rhymes make it difficult to take your poetry seriously.
I hope you will consider more revision. I was born and grew up in the deep south. I love its history, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
-- Dylan Thomas