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Mrs. Fannie Lou Hamer, The Majorette by E.P. McKnight

 
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 12:30 pm    Post subject: Mrs. Fannie Lou Hamer, The Majorette by E.P. McKnight Reply with quote

Another noble subject...I commend you for your effort.

McKnight, these are serious poems about honorable historic events, however, the forced rhymes make it difficult to take your poetry seriously.

I hope you will consider more revision. I was born and grew up in the deep south. I love its history, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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