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Harry
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 8:28 am    Post subject: The Rat Who Showed Up Reply with quote

The Rat Who Showed Up

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Dominic Martia


This is an extremely well written and crafted piece, but I find myself wondering if its argument stands up to bright light. It seems to me the problem could be solved by an exterminator very quickly.
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 2:27 pm    Post subject: The Rat who Showed UP Reply with quote

I agree, why didn't the realtor call an exterminator? Or perhaps the author has another piece that goes with this one? But meh, I'm just musing I could be wrong about that Wink However I did like this short short. I did a lot of this my junior year in my fiction class, it was a very useful exercise and it helped me get my point across w/out using so many darned pages, which I think you did very well (although there are no page numbers on here.)
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