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Peter's Story by Stephen Collicoat

 
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 5:09 am    Post subject: Peter's Story by Stephen Collicoat Reply with quote

Peter's Story by Stephen Collicoat


I would guess that Peter became a famous short story writer in his later years. With a sister like Alice to amuse, he was almost forced to. Nice story, I think the ending needs a bit more of a punch.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 11:43 pm    Post subject: Peter's Story by Stephen Collicoat Reply with quote

Hello Stephen Callicoat, you have masterly mixed the element of fantasy and reality. A really enjoyable story!
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