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Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 5:09 am Post subject: Peter's Story by Stephen Collicoat |
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Peter's Story by Stephen Collicoat
I would guess that Peter became a famous short story writer in his later years. With a sister like Alice to amuse, he was almost forced to. Nice story, I think the ending needs a bit more of a punch. _________________ We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master.
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ehsan elahi ehsan Valued Member

Joined: 23 Jul 2005 Posts: 617 Location: pakistan
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Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 11:43 pm Post subject: Peter's Story by Stephen Collicoat |
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Hello Stephen Callicoat, you have masterly mixed the element of fantasy and reality. A really enjoyable story! _________________ ehsanelahi |
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