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Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 8:57 am Post subject: Stephen Collicoat - The Great Callisto |
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Stephen Collicoat - The Great Callisto
A great story with terrific possibilities. I think you need more build-up and a more exciting climax. Your two main characters, Frank and Robin are not really important to the story -- maybe they could find the remains of the lady in the audience. _________________ We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master.
Ernest Hemingway |
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