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My Dream is to Become A Star-Hermella Villma

 
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Heidi
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 10:06 am    Post subject: My Dream is to Become A Star-Hermella Villma Reply with quote

I liked your poem a lot, however I think that you could have done without writing my dream is to become a star at the end of each stanza it seemed a bit repetitive. Still it was good, I liked the images you used and the way you wrote it. well t.t.y.l. hope to see more from you! Cool
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