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Deep Feelings by Ashley Robinson

 
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 3:27 am    Post subject: Deep Feelings by Ashley Robinson Reply with quote

One can feel the deep hurt coming from this poem. It seems that it is too hard to love without having the same reciprocation.
Well done to the writer.The hurtful feelings come out very well.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 2:19 pm    Post subject: deep feelings Reply with quote

I enjoyed this poem alot it took me to a place I have visited so many times.



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PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 7:51 pm    Post subject: Deep Feelings by Ashley Robinson Reply with quote

I sense the feeling, which inspired this poetry. In fact, an unexpected event in my life has re-lite the power of passion, and trust that I long have locked away. Never would that feeling or place in my heart again be touched in such a way. Well, I was wrong; it was so sudden and unexpected, I was defenseless.

Like a breeze; with all my defenses up, the moment took my breath away, and I still wonder what happened. The walls I built over a 20 year period were gone, and returned to my soul was the feeling of trust, and love.

If you can write a poem, as you did here; you are 1/2 way back to the place in your soul that you seek.

May that special moment, take you for a second time, as it has taken me.
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