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Dark_crystal
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 8:41 pm    Post subject: Group Poem 2 Reply with quote

Ok, this time the poem will have a theme behind it...

The theme is: it is autumn, and it's around halloween. There is a boy and he finds out about a ghost who lives in his grandparents house.


So as we each make up a line make sure you stick to the theme.

This poem will be 25 lines long..


We shall begin with this line:


The sun rose one autumn morn',
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 9:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Its cold light glimmered on the dewey field
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2005 9:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The sun rose one autumn morn',
Its cold light glimmered on the dewey field

The harvest moon, well worn.
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 10, 2005 11:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The sun rose one autumn morn',
Its cold light glimmering on the dewey field
The harvest moon, well worn.'
slithering shadowing swaying with the grain
dauntmenot i whisper, forward on i creek
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 12:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

gst wrote:
The sun rose one autumn morn',
Its cold light glimmering on the dewey field
The harvest moon, well worn.'
slithering shadowing swaying with the grain
dauntmenot i whisper, forward on i creek

Which leads to the home where his grandparents sleep,
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 12:33 pm    Post subject: addition 2 poem Reply with quote

The sun rose one autumn morn',
Its cold light glimmering on the dewey field
The harvest moon, well worn.
slithering shadowing swaying with the grain
dauntmenot i whisper, forward on i creek
Which leads to the home where his grandparents sleep,
It was cold, wet, the boy rose from his bed to begin his chores while his grandparents slept soundly
He walked slowly to the barn to feed their horses suddenly he hears something rustle above him,
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 1:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

HEIDI? What on earth was all that about? We are talking about adding one line of POETRY.... not a half a page of rambling prose!

The sun rose one autumn morn',
Its cold light glimmering on the dewey field
The harvest moon, well worn.
slithering shadowing swaying with the grain
dauntmenot i whisper, forward on i creek
Which leads to the home where his grandparents sleep,

O.K. O.K. I've just read it again....... my fault.... carry on. It appears that from the fourth line down the gremlins took over. SORRY!
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 4:07 pm    Post subject: sorry Reply with quote

Sorry about that, I realized as I was writing it that we were only supposed to only add one line feel free to cut out the rest if you want since I broke the 'rules'. But oh well we all make mistakes, and that is not rambling prose, prose unfortunately a bit yes, but I write mostly free verse so sorry if it sounds too much like prose!
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 2:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The sun rose one autumn morn',
Its cold light glimmering on the dewey field
The harvest moon, well worn.
Penetrated not the dark night's shield
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