Joined: 14 Jan 2004
|Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 1:53 pm Post subject: Wordsworth Revisited by Carey Lenehan
I apologize for this late response. I know others have commented on your poems as a group, but I wanted to single this one out for further comment. Carey, I think Wordsworth would have been honored by your work! Your ababcc rhyme scheme is flawless, and while I could nit pick about the meter, I will not...this is one of the best contemporary poems I have read in awhile. The Writer's Voice should be honored that you chose to post. Thank you, Carey, for sharing. I hope you stay around, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
-- Dylan Thomas