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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:37 am    Post subject: Moses by Pamela Tyree Griffin Reply with quote

Moses by Pamela Tyree Griffin

A splendid piece of writing, Pamela. Gentle, understanding and understated. The combination makes for a work rare strength and beauty.

We'd love to know more about Moses and Pearl there must have been better times.
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 10:10 am    Post subject: Thanks! Reply with quote

I appreciate the kind words and for you taking the time to read.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 12:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Beautiful story, Pamela, and well written. The part that made it real to me was:

Some weeks later I received a box in the mail. The return address label said Pearl and Moses Dawn. I didn't open it right away, preferring to look at the name Moses Dawn for a while.

I can relate so easily to those real feelings of love...You expressed them beautifully, Pam, and I hope you will continue to share.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 12:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hello, Pamela!

I read your story with great interest. Id like to learn more about Pearl, and the girl who was a volunteer. And Id like to read other pages of her diary where she could describe other people in the hospital.
Your story is really short, but it shows several very interesting threads (plots).

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 2:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's a moving and well written piece, Pamela. Hope you can share many more with us.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 3:24 am    Post subject: Thanks! Reply with quote

Thanks so much for reading and for the support.
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