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Between Heaven and Hell by Frank Blacharczyk

 
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 5:35 pm    Post subject: Between Heaven and Hell by Frank Blacharczyk Reply with quote

The title of your poem immediately caught my eye, I'm always curious as to what about heaven and hell the writer wants to say. I have to admit that when I read who it was dedicated to I began to realize what it was. I really liked the way you ended the poem by using I which made it more personal. I also liked your description, and while I was put off by the run-on style of the poem at first, I got used to it after awhile. If I were to suggest anything it would be to break up the run-on tendencies with commas or semicolons that way the poem still had some flow but it would be easier to read.
ps-I haven't seen you around here before? Are you new? if so welcome to the Writer's Voice. If not I apologize heartily. Embarassed
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