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dkneip
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 7:17 pm    Post subject: spring break by mark kolar Reply with quote

hi mark,

if you would like my thoughts on your story, free of charge, of course, please respond with your motivations for needing/wanting to post the piece on the forum. i wonder if it was a homework assignment? did the teacher enjoy it? did the classmates get to read it/hear it? what was the overall consensus on the piece and after re-reading it, what are your thoughts on it?

thanks

danny
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 3:48 pm    Post subject: mark kolar-Spring Break Reply with quote

Hey I agree with Dkneip also, did you ever post this piece anywhere else, it seems oddly familiar to me for some reason. While I liked it, it did seem rather ordinary, not something you would want to post, as opposed to something the teacher says, "Now Mark you have to post something on here for a class assignment so please do so by Monday or you'll get an F" type of thing. Just my 2 cents worth.
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