Joined: 15 Jan 2004
Location: New York
|Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 6:26 am Post subject: The Jesuit by Mike Daly
|The Jesuit by Mike Daly
Trying to see the point, Mike. You leave a lot unexplained. What's bugging Frank to begin with? Does the devil really live in the Jesuit school? What's the significance of 1776? Why the violence and the constant stream of foul language ... what's your thesis, man?
And before you submit why not check the typos - some of them turn the whole piece into farce. "an abandoned baby is never easy to swallow."
We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master.