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Last Goodbye by Cara Walker

 
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 12:11 pm    Post subject: Last Goodbye by Cara Walker Reply with quote

Last Goodbye by Cara Walker Part Three

Another chapter full of authenticity and the crazy things people do when they're emotionally strung out. This chapter needs a little pruning and attention to grammar, but you're definitely on the right track.
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