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PostPosted: Sat Nov 23, 2013 4:22 am    Post subject: paragraph for my comparative essay Reply with quote

I just finished writing the third body paragraph for my comparative essay (on family life in two books), and I wanted to know if it was well written. If you see any mistakes (tense issues, sentence structure, grammar, etc). I think I misused some commas, but not sure. Any help would be greatly appreciated.
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