Joined: 15 Jan 2004
Location: New York
|Posted: Thu Oct 14, 2004 7:34 am Post subject: Terror by Valerie Harper
Pretty exhausting story, ending without much hope for poor Isabella. Well told, but it centers on chase and capture with no before or after. In my opinion it needs a more positive ending - not necessarily a happy ending, but one that makes the story wothwhile.
We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master.