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Linda
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 05, 2005 8:06 am    Post subject: Why by Heidi Yang Reply with quote

Hi Heidi,

Great! I can see the work you've put into this rewrite. Like Johanna's there are still a few things that you could cut, like adverbs and prepositional phrases, but, I think this is really a great revision. Cool

Linda

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