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Taken
by
Troy Luedke

I didn't
think the day would ever really come
But when I gazed into her eyes I soon became numb
Everything around me had faded away
The presence of her had taken its place
I never knew another that shines the way she does
An angel had been sent from somewhere up above
I had to take a chance, there was no other choice
I needed to meet this woman, to hear her tender
voice
She told me she was flattered, by what I thought of
her
But followed shortly after, "I'm taken by another"

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